Sunday, 15 December 2013

Death of Cats

Here are the two poems we compared in class.

Ode on the Death of a Favourite Cat,

Drowned in a Tub of Gold Fishes

                                          'Twas on a lofty vase's side,
Where China's gayest art had dyed
The azure flower~ that blow;
Demurest of the tabby kind,
The pensive Selima reclined,
Gazed on the lake below.
 
Her conscious tail her joy declared;
The fair round face, the snowy beard,
The velvet of her paws,
Her coat, that with the tortoise vies,
Her ears of jet, and emerald eyes,
She saw; and purred applause.
 
Still had she gazed; but 'midst the tide
Two angel forms were seen to glide,
The genii of the stream:

Their sealy armour's Tyrian hue
Through richest purple to the view
Betrayed a golden gleam.


The hapless nymph with wonder saw:
A whisker first and then a claw,
With many an ardent wish,
She stretched in vain to reach the prize.
What female heart can gold despise ?
What cat's averse to fish?
 
Presumptuous maid! with looks intent
Again she stretched, again she bent,
Nor knew the gulf between.
Malignant Fate sat by and smiled
The slippery verge her feet beguiled,
She tumbled headlong in.
 
Eight times emerging from the flood
She mewed to every watery god,
Some speedy aid to send.
No dolphin came, no Nereid stirred;
Nor cruel Tom nor Susan heard.
A favourite has no friend!
 
From hence, ye beauties, undeceived,
Know, one false step is ne'er retrieved,
And be with caution bold.
Not all that tempts your wandering eyes
And heedless hearts is lawful prize.
Nor all that glisters, gold


Death of a Cat


Always fastidious, it removed its dying 
From us, and lay down by it in the
dark 
As if death were a mouse, and a cat's role 
To deal with it, and not involve the house;
Chose a remote spot that, when I bent to help,
Shocked because it existed -I had thought 
The mind a complete map of home; left dust 
On my fingers when I had settled it
In front of the fire on an old blanket;
Insisted to the last on standing
And walking with frail dignity to its water
In its usual place in the kitchen, disdaining 
The saucer we had thoughtfully set near it.
 
And death was a wind that tested regularly
The strength the cat had left, and in its
walk 
Puffed on its flank and made it totter
Then courteously desisted. Death can
wait. 
Powerless, with crude tears, we watched the
cat 
Totter and reassert itself again and again
Its life the fuel for its will to live
Until the bones appeared, blood dried in
veins, 
The pelt was ragbag remnants, the eyes gone
out 
And the wind's task was easy and the cat
fell.

 


2 comments:

  1. Good evening, Ms Bathgate.
    Thank you very much for the poems; I'm glad I have more time to consider about the poems, now and I can understand some of the words, which I haven't known. However, if I can... there is a mistake in the poem "The Death of a Cat".
    Concretely here (the mistake is marked with the big letters) -->
    And death was a wind that tested regularly
    The strength OF the cat had left, and in its
    walk

    Anyway, I wish you the pleasant holidays; God bless you! :)

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  2. *I wish you to have..

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